The translations of Homer’s Iliad by Robert Fagles and Emily Wilson both capture the epic’s grandeur and depth, yet they demonstrate a distinct style and approach. Fagles’ translation, known for its vividness, begins with the powerful line "Rage—Goddess, sing the rage of Peleus' son Achilles," setting a dramatic tone that persists throughout his version. He opts for a more poetic, narrative-driven style that emphasizes the intensity and drama of the original Greek text. His translation of Book 5's interaction between Athena and Diomedes depicts Athena as energetically urging Diomedes on, using strong imagery like "her eyes blazing" and "strike him at close range," which underscore the urgency and passion of the encounter. Emily Wilson, known for her clear and accessible translations, brings a more modern and straightforward touch to the text. Her interpretation starts with "Goddess, sing of the cataclysmic wrath of great Achilles," highlighting the destructive power of Achilles' anger from the outset with a directness that makes the text approachable for contemporary readers. Wilson’s translation of the same Athena and Diomedes encounter accentuates clarity and conciseness with lines like "Do not hold back from that shapeshifter," providing a straightforward portrayal of divine intervention and heroism. Both translations maintain the original story's essence while catering to different reader preferences, Fagles offering a more intense and poetic experience and Wilson delivering clarity and modernity.
Rage—Goddess, sing the rage of Peleus' son Achilles,
murderous, doomed, that cost the Achaeans countless losses,
hurling down to the House of Death so many sturdy souls,
great fighters' souls, but made their bodies carrion,
feasts for the dogs and birds,
and the will of Zeus was moving toward its end.
Goddess, sing of the cataclysmic wrath
of great Achilles, son of Peleus,
which caused the Greeks immeasurable pain
and sent so many noble souls of heroes
to Hades, and made men the spoils of dogs,
a banquet for the birds, and so the plan
of Zeus unfolded—starting with the conflict
between great Agamemnon, lord of men,
and glorious Achilles.