Both E. V. Rieu and Herbert Jordan offer distinct translations of Homer's Iliad, each reflecting their unique approach to this epic. Rieu's translation is crafted in a prose style, making it accessible and straightforward for readers who may not be familiar with poetic forms. His language is more conversational and direct, as seen in passages like "Anger — sing, goddess, the anger of Achilles" from the opening lines, where he emphasizes the emotional intensity and straightforwardness of the narrative. The same simplification is evident when Athena speaks to Diomedes, characterized with modern clarity: "Don't be intimidated by wild Ares, that mad, double-dealing delinquent." This approach allows Rieu to convey the essence of the original text while making it readable for a broad audience. Herbert Jordan, in contrast, retains a poetic structure with a focus on lyrical quality and rhythm, as seen in the opening lines: "Sing, goddess, of Peleus' son Achilles' anger, ruinous, that caused the Greeks untold ordeals." His translation maintains a formal tone, preserving the epic feel of the original work. This is further illustrated when Athena guides Diomedes with the words, "Strike without scruple or respect for him—a frenzied two-faced pest since he was born," demonstrating Jordan's attention to poetic cadence and imagery. Both translators succeed in different ways, with Rieu offering clarity and accessibility through prose, and Jordan emphasizing the structural and rhythmic intricacies of Homeric verse.
Anger — sing, goddess, the anger of Achilles son of Peleus, that accursed anger, which brought the Greeks endless sufferings and sent the mighty souls of many warriors to Hades, leaving their bodies as carrion for the dogs and a feast for the birds; and Zeus' purpose was fulfilled. It all began when Agamemnon lord of men and godlike Achilles quarrelled and parted.
Sing, goddess, of Peleus' son Achilles' anger,
ruinous, that caused the Greeks untold ordeals,
consigned to Hades countless valiant souls,
heroes, and left their bodies prey for dogs
or feast for vultures. Zeus's will was done
from when those two first quarreled and split apart,
the king, Agamemnon, and matchless Achilles.